😭😭😭 Wow, this is so beautifully written, especially this line: "you took the last flicker of light from my chest" , he knew all of me too and still he did that, I didn't see it coming but I shattered like I was made of glass
This is so good....way too many fantastic and deeply truthful lines here to repeat....the first one that really spoke to me was "I never loved my body. It was only a house where my ghosts slept." Powerful. You are my 318 bedtime story :)
Too many have lived what you wrote with such a deep cut into the truth. I want to help, soothe and show you something else, but I would be disrespecting the courage it took to create this incredible piece of writing.
'' Maybe you never loved me at all. Maybe you just loved the sound of breaking''—That line cuts deep.
Sometimes it’s hard to tell the difference between being loved and just being needed! You capture that ache perfectly—the way some people are drawn not to us, but to the noise our hurt makes.
Thank you for sharing your vulnerability so honestly.
It is a really touching and meaningful poem but why to be sad about what you have lost why not to be happy about the good things or people you have I surelyb think that they truly believe in you so don't just think negativity stay strong and positive for them and the poem was really good keep it up
Thank you for sharing this!! Your writing is so deeply introspective and inspiring 🩷 My favourite line is: “But all I ever wanted was you…
not as a pair of hands,
but as a shelter.” Beautiful!! I resonate with your feelings, thank you for articulating them in such an elegant and moving way.
Aww thank you so much for taking your time and telling me that <33
oh my god this is so good
That means a lot, thankyou <33
😭😭😭 Wow, this is so beautifully written, especially this line: "you took the last flicker of light from my chest" , he knew all of me too and still he did that, I didn't see it coming but I shattered like I was made of glass
Aww that means a lot tysmm for letting me know you liked it <3
This is so good....way too many fantastic and deeply truthful lines here to repeat....the first one that really spoke to me was "I never loved my body. It was only a house where my ghosts slept." Powerful. You are my 318 bedtime story :)
ahhh i love this so much, you’re writing is SO beautiful 🤭🤭
wow this is absolutely beautiful, aashritha 💗 so gorgeously written, the imagery is eye opening tbh
really loved this piece, and i hope you heal soon 🖤
Omg tysmm
Coming from you 😭😭😭
Means a lotttt, again thanks a lot for taking your time and reading it :))
Too many have lived what you wrote with such a deep cut into the truth. I want to help, soothe and show you something else, but I would be disrespecting the courage it took to create this incredible piece of writing.
Aww thanks and no I would love to read yours :))
I haven’t the words to say just how this is … powerful, beautiful , touches a nerve .
Aww that means a lot, thanks for sharing :)
'' Maybe you never loved me at all. Maybe you just loved the sound of breaking''—That line cuts deep.
Sometimes it’s hard to tell the difference between being loved and just being needed! You capture that ache perfectly—the way some people are drawn not to us, but to the noise our hurt makes.
Thank you for sharing your vulnerability so honestly.
Omg <3 thank youu so much for taking your time to read and say that, means a lotttt 😭
Yes I understand but I am just saying to try to forget the bad memories now and try to create some good one's
It is a really touching and meaningful poem but why to be sad about what you have lost why not to be happy about the good things or people you have I surelyb think that they truly believe in you so don't just think negativity stay strong and positive for them and the poem was really good keep it up
It's not about forgetting it's about what I experienced you know